As the initial plan went, this was intended as the first time we see Edwin VanCleef; I took great care to avoid his name being mentioned within the narrative to raise a question as to whether he was even there. In the end though, I don’t think a single person actually went for it.
Soooo, I put his introduction a little earlier to get something else out of it, and instead of implying he might not be there, settling for implying that they might miss him entirely. As a result, it becomes all the more apparent that it ends up being him that seeks them out, rather than what you’d normally have.
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