Late page is late, also serious page is serious! *cough* I found the ocean travel rather convenient for this kind of character dialogue since it’s isolated, and with the characters being seperated by internal strife, it even offers space to work with them individually, rather than as a unity. I found this page rather interesting – albeit difficult – to concoct; the script is quirky in that while the dialogue is about Hani Foonmall, the page itself is not. Making dialogue where the point isn’t what the dialogue says about the topic but about the person saying it is somewhat odd, and I’d imagine it’ll be up to anyone but me to decide whether it’s successful or not.
I also randomly noticed halfway through that the ship sails were still hidden, prompting a re-render of half the panes – which also made me notice that the previous two pages also didn’t have sails showing at the time. Eheh.. oops? I’m sure there’s some convenient nautical reason as to why they might’ve had their sails retracted in the previous pages, but the real reason is because I forgot they existed and thus forgot making them visible.