So the other half; I’m aware it’s a slight time skip – oddly enough the dialogue felt like it flowed better by having a cut rather than just continuing as it were. It also leaves a few more up for imagination which may or may not produce expected results. What it will do is have effect, so here’s to hoping it’ll be close enough to the right one. In the very least, we can finally leave this one corner of the mines and move on.
edit: Won’t be an update today (sunday, 10’th); I know what to do for the next page, but my mind’s a bit too scattered to commit to it. It’ll be up on thursday when I hopefully have had time to sort my thoughts together.